We heard the baritone command of the rain
— it was a cello’s thrum, a wordless play —
upon the stone cobbles beneath shoe-less hooves.
We clouded together under the canopy
of a delicatessen and waited for the pastrami
to invite us inside, but it was typically mute
(as pastrami will be), and so we waited.
We had no umbrella,
and my suit was freshly laundered
and Dee’s hairstylist was profoundly anti-weather,
so we watched the sky and the gray passers-by,
and waited for a change:
perhaps a burr of sunlight,
or a morsel of blue above the Grand Theatre
or William’s Mercantile?
But none availed itself to us.
My wristwatch was impatient,
for I had an appointment to somewhere,
and Dee was terribly afraid of catching
pneumonia or heart-faintness,
and the Delicatessen was about to close.
We would be stranded! in the middle of the city,
perhaps savaged by the wageless poor
that roamed the alleys behind the
dry-cleaning establishment.
The music of the rain no longer entertained us,
and our bones shuddered in the dampness.
Dee’s glasses were misted by her anxious tears,
and I longed for a cup of Earl Grey, strongly brewed,
and in a civilized setting.
I sighted a taxi-cab passing by,
Off Duty, it suggested, and I waved,
and the attendant waved his finger back at me
— a charming fellow — but he still drove away.
And now here we wait, Dee and I,
impervious to this foul weather:
more resilient than most, and braver than many.
The afternoon has fallen upon us in a very hard way,
but my suit is still unassailable
and Dee’s curls still hold most successfully.
We will wait until our moral victory is assured
should the rain ever stop for a moment or two
or until the umbrella shop next door
re-opens its doors to us before
close of business today.
Still we hear the baritone command of the rain
— it is a cello’s thrum, a wordless play —
upon the stone cobbles beneath shoe-less hooves.
You always know how to make a scene come alive. I loved the humor in it.
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Thank you… it was fun to write. 🙂
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Fun to read too 🙂
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Thank you, that’s kind. 🙂
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This is a lovely read – you set the scene excellently and your use of words is simply divine.
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Wow, thanks so much. 🙂
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What a picture you paint – watercolor!
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Thank you, Sheila. How appropriate. 🙂
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I just swooned and fell over from your gift with words. What a vivid scene, Steven. Your metaphors make my writer’s heart happy. ❤
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Thanks so much, Diana. I had some fun with this, something to pull me out of the doldrums. So glad you liked it. 🙂
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A light-hearted word picture, Steven. Lovely. 🙂 — Suzanne
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A light-hearted word picture, Steven. Lovely. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you so much, Suzanne.
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