The creational rain

I have not been so familiar with house shoes as I have been for these past seventeen days. It is impossible to walk barefoot across my kitchen without feeling unclean. The floor is sticky and gritty from the rolling, breathing rain. The water that spills from the Rio Pardo pours across the corduroy rows of the cornfield, flattens them, then churns the soil into runnels of muddy syrup.

It has been a creational rain, and I fear what it will bear. I fear the diseases that may live in that water, and I dread the chance of an unholy baptism should my children fall into it.  I worry about the cholera it may bring, and the mosquitoes it will tempt.

We are worn by the blankness of this rain. It has been a cortina that clings to our windows, and it fills my days with worry. Each day fades into another, each with the same blankness and the same worry.

We play card games, and I sing them the childhood songs I only half remember, and I try to teach them my Spanish. If the rain stops, they will forget my language, and I will forget the songs I sung to them. There is a sadness to this that hurts me throughout, this forgetting of things that will one day drown us.

This night, and every night, we will wear our shoes to bed, and we will shield our eyes with our arms, and we will listen to the rain shout at us. And perhaps we will sleep. If the rain opens all our doors, it will already be too late for us to run. 

I have not been so familiar with house shoes as I have been these past seventeen nights.


Between the folds of the map

Tú allí!” she shouted, and I jumped. “You there!”

Mara stood at the edge of the parking lot, and she gestured. Sometimes her hair was plaited, and sometimes she wrapped it in a scarf. Now it was loose, and it flowed below her shoulders. She wore a blousy ivory caftan that almost matched the color of her hair, and a pair of holystoned sandals. If I were an artist, I would have drawn her with brown and beige pencils, and filled in her shadows with a turquoise crayon.

She was looking beyond me.

A fat gray cat swaggered out from a cluster of chasima behind me. It was sturdy, with dense fur that shivered silver in the hard morning sunshine. The cat seemed prosperous and tame, and there was a kitten draped between its jaws. The kitten was very small, and it was dead.

Where you go now, Mrs. Kokopelli?” Mara said. She sounded a bit like a cat herself, growlish and teasing.“We must follow her,” she said. “You must see this.”


Of course, you,” she said. “The cat already knows what she has seen.”

I said, “Cats do not interest me. I came here to avoid them, and all else, if possible.”

She crossed her arms slowly, and her expression did not change. “Am I to be curious about that? Do you need me as an audience to move your story along?” She stepped towards me. “It seems like you might have something important to say? Someday?”

No. My story is uninteresting. That’s why I came here.”

Here? To this particular motel? To this particular moment when we should meet?”

We can follow the cat,” I said. “I’m sure she has more interesting things to tell you.”

Her smile was uncomplicated. “Do you have to fight at everything?” It seemed like a serious question.

I don’t know. Probably.”

The cat padded across the hardpan beyond the parking lot. Already, the ground was hot.

Mara was standing beside me. I did not notice her approach until it was complete. She moved as easily as a shadow being pulled by the sun.

You come from a great distance?” she asked.

Sure,” I said. “This place was in all the brochures, and it had all five stars.”

Ah. But you don’t even know where you are, do you?”

Of course I do. I’m following a cat into the desert.”

There is more here than you have considered,” she said. “You do consider things, don’t you?”

I used to,” I said. “But now I drive and then I stop driving. Now I have stopped driving. I have no idea where I am.”

We are at an ancient place, between the folds of the map. Unnoticed, and sometimes carelessly erased. It is a resting place. You are exhausted, we are exhausted, Mrs. Kokopelli the cat is exhausted. We come here to heal. These things take time. The cat is in no hurry, I am in no hurry. Why do you hurry?”

I thought about it, but hurried through my thoughts. “Because time is chasing me.”

It chases everyone,” said Mara. “We are all captured at the end of our journeys.”

No,” I said. “Not like this.”

You are not so special,” she said.

No. I’m not. But this is where we are. Destined to follow Mrs. Kokopelli the Cat to the end of our days.”

Mara laughed at me, but it was not a cruel sound. “I am a magic woman. Perhaps you have heard that about me?”

Cándido said such a thing when I arrived. He said you were beautiful but innocent.”

He did? That is kind. What do you think that means?”

Maybe he loves you.”

Maybe he does. I love him. I love all the ancient and weary ones.”

Is that what I am?”

I cannot say. I do not know you, I do not love you. Are you ancient? I know you are weary.”

And how do you know that?” I asked.

Because you are here.”

We followed Mrs. Kokopelli a little further, and I saw the sun fill the belly of the great sky. I felt sound.

Comes the rain

Boyd Henry over there, he watches me. I have never seen a child so committed to watching. He is four years old and seven months. I love him, Lord, but his intensity wears on me. He plays with his toys under the porch, and the dried-up mud and boot grit falls on the back of his neck. He flours up the dust, and it powders most of him, but his neck gets it worse. He shows me his dusty palms when he sees me seeing him.

Lorianne is on the porch with him now, and her hands are curled around his small shoulders. I’m grateful that she loves him, because Boyd Henry is different from most. He is my gift, he is my surprise.

Today is wash day, the day I float away. Watching Boyd Henry makes me lonely to think there was a time before him. It makes me lonely whenever the wash water from the cotton pillowcases drips onto my arms, because it bears the same coldness and travels down the same paths of my skin as it did last week, and last month.

Nothing has changed, except in the small ways of loneliness, and in the smaller ways of fading.

The sheets and towels are to be washed first. They need to hang before the rain catches them. The wind has swelled up, and it tugs at my kerchief like a kite. Boyd Henry stops wiggling in Lorianne’s arms, and he watches me as I adjust the scarf. He is already dirty, and he will turn into mud when it starts to rain. She wipes him down with a washcloth when she can.

The woods beyond the hayfield are generously leafy because of the rain, and there are some mornings when their greenness becomes transparent in the sunshine.

And so I rise.

I see the shape of a man come forth from these trees, and it is an unblemished shape, clean and handsome. I wonder if he is a good man. It will take him a long time to reach my doorway.

At first, his stride is strong, and he walks with purpose, but after a few steps, he begins to founder. He struggles with the slope of the field and the softness of the soil. He is still just a shape to me, too far to notice his features, but even in the distance I see that he is tall and narrow-chested. With each step, his left leg falters. He clutches it and continues. I cannot see his face, but I can see his pain.

The crows,” says Lorianne, and she points to the selfsame field.

There are a half-dozen crows on the other side of the field gate, and they glide low to the ground. Abruptly, they ascend, like barn swallows, and there is a strenuous fold and unfolding of wings. Their constructs are not made for elegant flight, and they rise in an awkward lurch, and nearly collide with one another. They repeat the design again and again, moving further down the field each time, flexing their wings in evident agony, until they disappear below the standing hay.

Lorianne’s face is serious, but she giggles at the strangeness of it. “Why were they flying like that, mama?”

I don’t know,” I say. “They might be warning us of a bad storm.”

Or it might be a bird illness. Or it might be they were not crows at all. I don’t say those things, of course, because it will cause her to worry. But I don’t know why they were flying like that.


It’s not a hard thing to do, to leave a place where you don’t belong. The things you walk away from, the pictures and trinkets and combs, they are just the scraps of our presence. There will be new things, and they will probably be the same things, but with different thoughts behind them. There will always be things to gather for our tables.

I left my father’s house when I was young, and then my grandmother’s when I was done being foolish. This place has become my truest home. I came here when I married, and I have stayed here since he passed, six years ago. This land belonged to his family, and then to him, and now to me. If it would bring him back, even for a minute, I would leave it behind. But it is my children’s home now, his daughter and my son. I lease out the work fields and I raise my children the best I can. I keep my pictures and trinkets and combs in a box carved from gopher wood, under my bed.


The rain is hard, as promised. We sit inside our little living room and listen to the tin roof percussion. It is a loud and drunken sound. Lorianne has her box of crayons on the rug, and she hunts for the right shade of rain. Boyd Henry watches her, and he peels off the papers, one color at a time. She digs into a plastic shopping bag for another coloring book, and she moans, quite theatrically: “Oh, my goodness, have I done them all?”

I stare at the wood stove and the slow tangle of flame: how long will it keep us warm, how long will it give us light?

And the rain, it still falls, five days in.

He wears  a white shirt, sweat-stained, wrinkled. His hair is black, tousled, but thinning. Gray eyes, uneven teeth, a weary shrug of shoulders. Just let me sit down for a minute, he says.

He said, “There will be rain. You will need two of everything. One plus one.”

“I have two,” I said.

“The rain will be hard,” he said. “And it will last. Forty days, at least.”

Boyd Henry, over there, he watches me watching him. And Lorianne, she loves me in my fever, loves me in my worry,  and in my rain.

His hair is black and tousled. I have two children who are surviving the rain. And my boy, he watches me, and I watch him back. But it is harder to see him, because we are becoming blurs in the rain.

The man on the other side of the door

This is a place of unremarkable geometry, of hand hewn beams and reclaimed cabinets, of cotton curtains and poplin tablecloths.There are stout lines built around her silly feminine froth. You might savvy her girlish moods: the bright New Orleans yellow in the hallway, or maybe the baby doll figurines on the bookcase. But don’t forget, this is my home, and it is a place of unremarkable cruelties. 

There are stains in my study that look like ketchup, but are not. There are sudden movements that turn on all the security lights.There is a smell that is barely masked by the nine dollar dirt that feeds her windowsill herbs.

I’ve heard all these sounds before, but this one is closer, and I know why. There is a man on the other side of the door, limping, wet from the chase. He beats on the glass with the heel of his hand. I turn on the porch light because I know. I’ve been expecting him for twenty years, back from a time when my life was fraying. He took the left road and I took the right. I don’t want to see him now — for us to see each other, really — but his t-shirt is torn from armpit to belly, and I swore to him. He is older now, of course he is, but his eyes still show his fury, and mine have turned soft and careless. 

Richard,” was the only word he had to say, and I knew it was time.